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Re: Crying Moon {2}
I don't like reviewing things that other people already have, but there were a few things I was simply itching to point out. And if you don't like harsh reviews, ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: Another Teen Pregnancy Story, Part 2
I guess you could say I like it. I mean, subtracting all comparisons between you and other fourteen-year-olds, it flounders a bit, but the characters, while they could use to ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (9)
PG-13 for suggestive theeeeemes. Or something. Remember: advice, nitpicks not needed! ;) Days after that first one passed with haste, and I lost track of time rather easily. Hare was ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: You would cut somebody's head off (2)
I don't believe it. I don't believe it. [long rant full of useless compliments and confusing metaphors] If you chicken out and don't make them fall in love in the ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: A Man In Silk Pajamas (2)
Thank you, thank you. "I just can't seem to picture it on myself... I am in no position financially to get a new dress either. But that is a story ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: You would cut somebody's head off (1)
Since you're too good of an author to really need any of the advice I usually give, I guess I'll have to humbly point out the nitpicks. Look how fast ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (8)
Finally! At last! After all these long years! Editing on the later chapters has been done, and editing on the earlier will soon be underway. Answers should be questioned, my ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 5
Do you want us to hate Amanda? Because I do. That is, not the character especially, 'cuz there's not much to that, but the way she whines about David, the ...
May 21, 2009 -
Re: Space Adventure: The Star Guantlet
I don't do nitpicks, and anyways, Smaur got pretty much all of them. So I'm just going to tell you, straight up, what I thought, and we'll go from there. ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: 7 Reasons Why Not to Live With Your Best Friend
Man, I've done this a billion times, but here we go again. Sela is moi, and I'm not going to be heaping compliments on your head or apologizing for my ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I couldn't resist throwing my bit in. I've practically done a study on Twilight . I've been on YWS for over a year, and found oodles of Twifans and anti-Twilighters ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Fading Rainbow (ch 2)
Sela, at y'service. ; ) I'm not here for nittynitpicks, but more sentence structure and the plot-line overall. I did see some typos and things, but a read-over and some ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
Nightmares ate away at the cloth. No one knew he could breathe. She liked her sister better dead. Too many nights for one day. Blood dripped from nobody onto nothing. ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The Wings of Merlin , by T. A. Barron. I don't know what possessed me to read it through, but I did, and when I looked back, I realized how ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell
This is, without a doubt, one of my favorite books. Ever. It is, in a nutshell, about the revival of magic in England in the early nineteenth century. The characters ...
May 11, 2009
